tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762360188700065101.post7126792757527152031..comments2023-10-30T03:53:20.405-04:00Comments on EN 170 Summer 2009: Introduction to Literary Study: Malcolm in the middle and Marx in the endUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762360188700065101.post-86096823150674465812009-07-12T11:30:06.529-04:002009-07-12T11:30:06.529-04:00Great idea to work with the show--if you'd sta...Great idea to work with the show--if you'd started the piece with the quotations from Marx about halfway down you would have begun in a stronger place. You'd have set up the theoretical framework for the piece, which would give the reader and understanding of why you're talking about this show and how you'll be talking about it. Also, keep working at being specific--most of the things you say here are sort of generally true of Malcom in the Middle, rather than necessarily drawn from one episode.S Henklehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10893192932580925482noreply@blogger.com